Review: undressed (The Manhattanites #1) by Avery Aster

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Title:  Undressed
Author: Avery Aster
Publisher/Year:  Ellora’s Cave Publishing Inc 2/5/13
Length:  326 Pages
Series: The Manhattanites #1

Overview 

Book 1 in The Manhattanites series. Milan’s notorious playboy, Prince Tittoni, seems to have everything—Lamborghinis, exotic women, palaces throughout Europe and business success. Ramping up his fabric company to go global with a new apparel brand, he ruthlessly stops supplying fabrics to the American client who inspired the collection. But once they meet, what’s he willing to give to get her in his bed? Upper East Side designer Lex Easton has already endured her fair share of hard knocks. She’ll be damned if she’ll let an Italian stud muffin knock her down. So what if she named her favorite vibrator after him? With Fashion Week approaching, she’ll do whatever it takes to secure the fabrics she needs to make her clothing line an international success—even sleep with her rival. Lex’s Louboutins are dug in deep to win this war. All’s fair in love and fashion! Inside Scoop: Though the hero and heroine remain monogamous, their Prada-wearing friends indulge in a ménage a trois and other fashionable sexual fun and games. A Romantica® contemporary erotic romance from Ellora’s Cave

My Thoughts

Where to start…..I so wanted to enjoy this story since i’m a New Yorker myself.  I was hoping that we’d  get a bit more about the city life and socialites since Avery is a NYCer too – but that didn’t come through and honestly, i kind of felt like it was anyone writing about NY and that always bugs me.  At least a majority of this story doesn’t take place in the US at all so it’s not a complete loss.

We meet Lex (Alexandra) Easton who is the daughter of rocker Eddie Easton who had a notorious reputation for being a partier/rocker and was married to Birdie who wasn’t so innocent herself.  Birdie has been in and out of rehab, most notably even after Eddie’s death.  Now, mother and daughter work together in their fashion company that has become a pretty significant success in the industry.  What i don’t follow here though is why we are supposed to believe that this company is so successful when it’s not ‘mass market’ when the name is ‘Easton Essentials’. to me, a name like that doesn’t scream prestige, but instead it tells me Target / Macys  – outlets like that.  But i digress.

So we’re taken on a journey with Lex where she’s found herself in a bit of a jam where her company doesn’t have the finances to pay for their fabric shipment needed to complete the samples for Fashion Week garments, and therefore may not even have the means to produce clothing if the orders were to come in and save her business.  what’s hard to really get here (which i suppose is a realistic thing) is that the company is actually quite successful – the orders are pouring in and there’s a great recognition of the brand with the public, it’s just a money pit at the onset.

Anyhow, Lex flies to Milan in the hopes of convincing Girasoli (the textile manufacturer) to release her fabrics and then be on her way back in time to make the designs come to life for Fashion Week.

Once Lex steps foot in Italy, we know that the European lifestyle and allure will take over and she’ll find herself in a precarious position of trying to both woo and avoid Prince Massimo with whom she has a fascination with (and even named her vibrator after).

The story continues through their interesting relationship where there’s clearly an attraction between the 2 but they are both quite damaged by their own pasts that it’s not something that will come easy to one another.  Lex has a voyeuristic tenancy that comes to life in various aspects of this story, and we’re given the sense that Massimo is quite the man – even more than most women can handle.

Along with the interactions between them, we get the dark backstory that makes the prince what he is – we learn about what his father the King was like and how that affected him – similar to how Eddie affected Lex.

What i couldn’t get past though in this story is the way that it was written.  i honestly felt like it was written by a teenage boy who really has no idea how to write mature sounding sex scenes.  the verbiage used was really kind of gruff and even off putting for a story that could have been elevated to a prestige level.  the plot line is there but the wording – PAINFUL.  it took me far longer than it should have to read this since i honestly kept putting it down to read other things.  since i’m not one to let a book beat me, i finally just sucked it up and sat up all night last night just to finish it so i don’t have a partially read ebook in my library.

the question now becomes – do i read book 2?  Unscrupulous is also in my library and i really want to give this series the benefit of the doubt – i just don’t know if i can do it right now.  Let me know what you guys think though – i’d love to get your take on it.

2 thoughts on “Review: undressed (The Manhattanites #1) by Avery Aster

  1. honey i think you should delete book two from your e-reader and move to an author you’d enjoy. perhaps one who doesn’t writes prestigious mature sounding sex scenes. because my books are funny snarky clit-lit.

    • Appreciate the thought – I guess my expectations were perhaps misplaced. Regardless, like i said, the story line was nice enough once i got a bit into it, so the thought that we’ll get to know more about Taddy, Vive, Blake and anyone else in the mix in the coming books makes me want to give it another try.

      Side note too – i’ve also been one to have mixed or not so stellar feelings about a story the first time around but as i’ve waiting for the next installment to come out and re-read as a catch up, my opinion has been known to change and i’m not shy about revising 🙂 thanks!!

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